Proofreading Tips #7: Introductory ClausesAs the name implies, an introductory clause is a dependent clause at the beginning of a sentence. The preceding sentence, in fact, contained such a clause. Use commas to separate introductory clauses and certain phrases from independent clauses. Introductory phrases of more than five words or phrases containing verbal elements also require commas. Dependent clause openers include:WhenIfAsAlthoughBecauseAfterThoughDuringBeforeWhileSome examples are:"As expected, she could not turn in the homework on time.""In the fall of last year, we held a family reunion." (use a comma after a phrase containing five or more words)"To decide, they held a
Tutorial Tuesday: Poses pt 2So do you guys remember that post I did a couple weeks ago about poses? Specifically about how to use stick figures? Great! cause that will make this tutorial make more sense... plus it'll save me time, as I don't have alot right now.Today's Tutorial is also about poses. But something very specific about the poses...STANDING VS MOVEMENTWhen you boil it down, your figure will be only in one of two poses. They'll either be stationary or moving (duh.) In my student's work i've seen countless figures that SHOULD be standing still, but look like their falling. Reversly I've seen just as many figures that SHOULD be moving about, but they look like their just standing around lazily...So how do you get a figure to look like their moving, or standing still? The key is the center of gravity!"Uh... what? What the crap is that?" you may be asking yourself. Well it's the center point of
Persona Creation*If you dont like Persona or The Shin Megami Tensei Series, then click the return icon, because this journal entry is not, I repeat is not for you!People complain about how hard it is to make a Persona, and It's kinda ticking me off. Some people don't even put effort and/or creativity into theirs, such as: http://browse.deviantart.com/?qersona+3+oc&offset=72#/d32vvt5 no offense, to him but can you count this as a real Persona oc? Although I've yet to play 4, I've watched it, and this "Persona" would not fit into it. But enough of my criticism. Im making this tutorial as to how I make a persona, If your reading this, and have interest in making a Persona, keep reading.1) Brain Storming This is the most important part of making a Persona. Go on the Persona wiki: http://megamitensei.wikia.com/wiki/Megami_Tensei_Wiki or google and look at some Persona, these are the real deal and thats probably how you'd like yours to be, right? Thats how I felt when I first
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ersona+3+oc&offset=72#/d32vvt5 no offense, to him but can you count this as a real Persona oc? Although I've yet to play 4, I've watched it, and this "Persona" would not fit into it. But enough of my criticism. Im making this tutorial as to how I make a persona, If your reading this, and have interest in making a Persona, keep reading.
